无泪之眼 发表于 2006-6-20 22:20:50

闯进黑暗

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 29.5pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.45;"><strong><font face="黑体"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font color="#008000" size="5">&nbsp;</font></span></span></font></strong></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 23.6pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue;"><strong><font face="黑体">我把孤独砸进山体<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 23.6pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue;"><strong><font face="黑体">引起凄惨的呻吟<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 23.6pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue;"><strong><font face="黑体">来不及探究<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 23.6pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue;"><strong><font face="黑体">是谁被我的寂寞伤害<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 23.6pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue;"><strong><font face="黑体">捂着几乎骇破的心脏逃窜<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 23.6pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue;"><strong><font face="黑体">追赶的声音渐渐消失<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 23.6pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue;"><strong><font face="黑体">我发现自己闯进了黑暗<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 23.6pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue;"><strong><font face="黑体">寂静的四周<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 23.6pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue;"><strong><font face="黑体">是什么在埋伏着<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 23.6pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue;"><strong><font face="黑体">我祈祷<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 23.6pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue;"><strong><font face="黑体">被爱层层包围<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></strong></span></p>

仨石子 发表于 2006-6-21 17:16:42

<p>嘎嘎</p><p>哎^^^^^</p>

蝴蝶蓝 发表于 2006-6-21 23:27:36

楼上的为什么叹息啊!

郭良子 发表于 2006-6-22 13:03:32

哈哈，请问你认识空杯也醉人吗？<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">无泪之眼，你怎么和他那么相似啊？我领你去大观逛逛吧，哈哈。</font></strong>

丁贫小朱 发表于 2006-6-22 14:13:06

<p>用词还值得推敲</p><p>稍欠气息,提炼不够</p><p>一已之见,望批评</p>
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