鲜圣 发表于 2006-5-14 17:15:53

[原创]暗香浮动(散文诗)

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 创艺简标宋; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-width: 100%;">暗香浮动(散文诗)</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; mso-font-width: 100%; mso-fareast-font-family: 创艺简标宋;"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-width: 100%;">□鲜</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-width: 100%; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-width: 100%;">圣(四川省巴中电视台</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-width: 100%; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>636000</font></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-width: 100%;">)</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; mso-font-width: 100%; mso-fareast-font-family: 创艺简标宋;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 29.05pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-font-width: 100%;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 29.05pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-width: 100%;">一棵树的香气区别于另一棵树。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-font-width: 100%;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 29.05pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-width: 100%;">花瓣展开,多少生命绽放留有余香,多少苍桑岁月被一朵花埋葬。花瓣簇拥,照亮一树的精彩;花香走动,像一只鸟从一棵树窜到另一棵树上,像一只手紧握着另一只手,像一个声音把另一个声音覆盖。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-font-width: 100%;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 29.05pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-width: 100%;">暗香浮动。香是一种重量。花香击中的目标首先是一只蝴蝶,然后才是我们。沿着树枝的方向行走,花香一年高过一截枝头,一年打湿一遍天空。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-font-width: 100%;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 29.05pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-width: 100%;">纯净而透明。香,是一棵树成长的声音,是一棵树内心的河流。花香走多远,树就走多远。一棵树举着花蕊的灯盏向上移动。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-font-width: 100%;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 29.05pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-width: 100%;">盘旋,把天空覆盖。空气中凝固着花朵的血液,流淌着花朵的色彩。呼吸,弥漫的暗香像灰烬,留存着火星的温度,把天空照得格外温暖。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-font-width: 100%;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 29.05pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-width: 100%;">香气延伸,像树伸出的手臂,把一只蜜蜂、一只蝴蝶甚至一个人的目光拽住。沉醉,香的浓度,浸泡着一双双失眠的眼睛,打湿了树荫下沉默的身影。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-font-width: 100%;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 29.05pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-width: 100%;">跌落,树丫上响着香气脱落的声音。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-font-width: 100%;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 29.05pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-width: 100%;">花朵把花朵掩埋。花香把花香包裹。上升的花香是一棵树挥动的手势,正在与春天的行走告别。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-font-width: 100%;"><p></p></span></p>

清空朗月 发表于 2006-5-14 17:19:12

<p>耐品耐嚼,棒极了!</p><p>欢迎鲜圣光临太行~~~~~</p><p>&nbsp;</p>

清空朗月 发表于 2006-5-14 17:22:44

<p>很喜欢这个,配曲《暗香》助兴~~~~</p><p>http://img.valen.sohu.com/photos/71/466071.swf</p>

鲜圣 发表于 2006-5-14 17:23:44

问好清空朗月.

琴语 发表于 2006-5-24 11:03:54

<p>合理而奇特的想象,文字充满花朵的芳香.整篇文字清新自然,结构和情节都非常完整,似一气呵成,读后带给读者丰富的想象和美好感受,实在是难得的作品.我觉得结尾也非常好,花季结束了,花朵凋谢了,一棵树用花香做手势,在与一个季节,与春天做着最后的告别,很令人回味的语言.非常喜欢!</p><p>建议精华!</p><p>欢迎朋友常来交流!</p>

兰心 发表于 2006-9-13 21:10:29

花朵把花朵掩埋。花香把花香包裹。上升的花香是一棵树挥动的手势,正在与春天的行走告别。
——欣赏!

斯厚人 发表于 2006-9-13 21:20:44

令人回味的语言很诗意

杨志广 发表于 2006-9-13 22:58:16

凝练精致的美文!

梅影三叠 发表于 2006-9-14 11:03:29

不错的,似乎在哪里读过,配乐就更美了:)

梅影三叠 发表于 2006-9-14 11:04:28

我来点精哦!
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