葑凌渡
发表于 2006-6-17 20:32:18
[原创]青春的恋曲（组诗）
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">光阴的衣裳<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">是年是月还是日？女孩</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">青梅熟了，你来过</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">流浪的养蜂人</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">睡在</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">午后花香里</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">荒原的家</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">被追逐的云朵</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">一朵一朵</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">却是遍地的槐花</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 华康简宋;"><font face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">唇<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>色<p></p></span></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">别告诉我害怕黑暗</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">知道你的</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">存在</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">被一只灵异的喊声</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt; tab-stops: 157.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">证明</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-tab-count: 1;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">花落的瞬间</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">让脱离的暧昧</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">击伤。一场不期而遇的春雨</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">抛去一抹香味</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">或许</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">桃色</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 华康简宋;"><font face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">一支短笛<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">被野风吹奏着</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">那支曲子</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">春季里触碎了呼吸</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">纤细的俏指跳动</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">笛膜</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">消失的不知去向</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">那支曲子</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">突然从我的心里</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">飘走</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 创艺简标宋;"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span><p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">背后的城市<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"> <p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">走吧<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>别忘记穿上<p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">昨夜的衣裳<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">你喜欢“城里的月光”<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">飘荡着<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>莫名其妙的忧伤<p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"> <p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">冰冷的射线<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>夜色里<p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">穿过水润的月亮心脏<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 创艺简标宋;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">女孩与花香<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"> <p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">女孩<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>你叫什么名字？<p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">把摘下的几串槐花<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">抛向油城的风里<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"> <p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">为谁的红颜<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">把春天的眸子搅浑<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"> <p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 创艺简标宋;"> <p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 创艺简标宋;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 经典繁古印;">写于</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Aarco-; mso-fareast-font-family: 经典繁古印;">2005</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 经典繁古印;">年的春天<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p>
心语
发表于 2006-6-17 22:05:21
葑凌渡
发表于 2006-6-20 12:04:01
感谢领导的爱戴.问好.
郭良子
发表于 2006-6-20 13:10:51
语言不错！你写散文诗应该是你的特长！
葑凌渡
发表于 2006-6-22 18:15:27
<p>我写散文很少,写小说多一些.</p>
陈绎如
发表于 2006-6-27 15:19:39
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">花落的瞬间</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">让脱离的暧昧</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">击伤！</span></p>
地狱游客
发表于 2006-6-28 00:00:20
<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>陈绎如</i>在2006-6-27 15:19:39的发言：</b><br/><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">花落的瞬间</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">让脱离的暧昧</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 79.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">击伤！</span></p></div><p>诗味很浓,陈兄选的这个诗句,可以说是里面最为出色的"鸣句"!</p>
秦之韵
发表于 2006-6-28 23:54:07
好轻灵的一组诗哟,读来酣畅无比!一个字,爽!
葑凌渡
发表于 2006-11-25 22:40:30
感谢大家捧场.
蓝郁
发表于 2006-11-26 09:58:41
再欣赏~~