[原创]《街市.怀旧》（几个）
<span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">街市</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">.</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">怀旧</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/><br/>很想弄些怀旧的格调来打理自己</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>仿佛街头名苑的风情广告</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>滚边的花旗袍在黑白的照片上摆动</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/><br/>仰着头看</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">画幅极远极远</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>隔了一百年的光阴</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">或者更久</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>眼神与光泽的唇在阳光下浓厚又这般地近</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>近得如同来自转拐处那间按摩房</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/><br/>我还在怀旧</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">走到又一条街的尽头</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>百年前的教堂里磨损了地面的青砖</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>祖母穿着旗袍从这里走过</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>衣衫中间有一条清楚的折痕</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>盘扣上挂着褛空花纹的碧玉牌</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">垂下</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>象牙刻花的牙签，银制的挖耳勺</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/><br/>当过往的车轮碾碎宁静的钟声</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>街市正用时间与繁华征服我的眼光</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>我在自己的皱纹里复习从前的赌局</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>继续</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">去那个怀旧的世界里充当一幅画</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>一个街头的广告</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">一件空洞的旗袍</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/><br/>“我为寻求着生命的意义而活着”，一个声音</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>我嘲笑着，把祖母留给我的象牙牙签打造</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>改装</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">时尚的项坠挂在胸口</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>用我的体温</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">温暖这朵鲜活的刻花</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><br/><br/><p></p></span><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">《时光之河畔》</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/><br/>我在时光之河畔打座</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>水漫上来</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>无法移动的身躯静静地等待</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/><br/>落花的梦境经过</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>一些蓝色的柔情粘上我的发丝</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>岸上的树很远</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">阳光温和</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/><br/>水继续漫上来</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>我来得及</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">重温一次你的面容</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>水草如云般飘过</span><span lang="EN-US"> </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/><br/>《写意魏紫》</span><span lang="EN-US"> </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/><br/>我寻找至美的风景</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>似醉非醉的心情</span><span lang="EN-US"> </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/><br/>水墨青山</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">写意魏紫</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>且</span> <span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">茶香四溢</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/><br/>几缕浮云</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">随风而散</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>不远处</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">阳光变幻葱笼树影</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/><br/>是谁走进我的岁月</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"><br/>不留下</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">一个姓名<br/>2006</span></span></p> <p>妹妹这几首是新写的了，我没读过呢，感觉非常好。尤其是怀旧，通过几个意象的交替，层层推进了诗的意境，把读者带进一种超越时空的意境中，如电影镜子的闪回，效果真是很不错。非常喜欢这一组。</p><p>我在时光之河畔打座。。。错了一字吧？</p> 问感动太行、郭朋友好！谢谢点评！<br/>琴姐姐说得是，字又错了。是前些时候写的，呵，最近总是偷懒：） 又见到朋友的诗了,语言和表达方式都很喜欢.尤其是城市.怀旧那首.
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